Tuesday, October 11, 2011

In the Ladies' Fitting Room

We look in the mirror, each line reminding
us of how quickly time is slipping through.
We each tell the other, I still feel young, or
Fifty is the new thirty. We still have time.

Secretly we think, How much longer can I show
cleavage? When is death more likely than finding
a partner? Am I doomed to grow fat and dowdy?
We each tell the other, We still have time.

©2011 R.M. Talbot

This is my response to Poetry Picnic Week 8: Friends, Relationships, and Everyone Around. A shopping trip a couple of years ago with my beautiful best friend Glenna provided the inspiration.

3 comments:

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

Thought provoking,

welcome, happy poetry picnic.

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

Thought provoking,

welcome, happy poetry picnic.

Ann LeFlore said...

yes you still do have time happy picnic
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/10/the-bird-of-love/