Monday, April 04, 2011

Clearly Misunderstood


I took the NaPoWriMo challenge: "Try writing a poem that responds to or riffs off of one of someone else’s NaPoWriMo poems." This poem is a spin-off a participant's blog title rather than a participant's poem.

Clearly Misunderstood

The masthead read, "Elegant Truth."
It is a lie. When is the truth
elegant? When first spoken, truth
rubs like sandpaper. To hear
-your baby's dead
-you've lost your job
-you have cancer
can all be true
but never
elegant.

Bespeak the truth with honeyed lips.
It is still truth. Whisper sweetly
words of dissolution, of death-
-she's in heaven
-budget crisis
-six months to live
though maybe true,
truly not
elegant.

Perhaps the writer of the masthead
meant to pen "Elephant Truth."
Truth tramples like the elephant.
Its power can coil round you,
constrict breathing
flatten spirits
immobilize.
Clearly not
elegant.

©2011 R.M. Talbot

1 comment:

Angela said...

This is great!